The chart below show the percentage of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below show the percentage of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts reveal information about the amounts of
water
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used in five different types of
industry
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: service
industry
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, building
industry
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, household use, manufacturing, and
food
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industry
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in Sydney and Australia between 1997 and 2007.
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, in 1997 the
food
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industry
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consumed the highest
water
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percentage at 48%,
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the building
industry
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required the least at only 5%. In the
last
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year, the statistics did not face any massive shifts,
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the
food
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industry
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still used the most
water
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and the building
industry
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used the least. In 1997, the top of the chart was owned by the
food
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industry
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at approximately one-half,
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in 2007
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amount slightly declined to more than two-fifths of the total. The portion used by the building
industry
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faced a two-fold decrease from 5% in 1997 to an insignificant amount at only 2%.
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, the household
industry
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sector was second to the
food
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sector at around one-fifth of the entire quantity in 1997, increasing to just over one-fifth at 21% in the period of 10 years. In the first year, the service
industry
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appropriated less than one-fifth of the
water
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used at 13%,
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the manufacturing
industry
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occupied 15% of the total. Surprisingly, in 2007 the service sector doubled its
water
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consumption, using one-quarter of the complete sum,
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the manufacturing
industry
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showed a downward trend to 11%.
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