The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

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The line chart illustrates different sources of

air

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pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005, which are

transport

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, industry,total

air

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pollutions

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pollution

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and

household

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Overa

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Overall

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all

the

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apply

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four parts

shows

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apply

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experience

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experienced

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different trends in the same time period. Despite these, that a crystal clear,

industry

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that industry

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and total

air

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pollution

shows

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show

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significantly rose

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significant rise

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Household

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households

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and

transport

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are contributed downwards. As the graph applies all of them

start

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started

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in 1990, but

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household

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households

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and

transport

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use the

air

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pollutions

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pollution

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just

a bout

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about

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million

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Tones

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, it is been steady remain until 1996,

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household

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the household

a household

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has been

decrease

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decreasing

decreased

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a bout half

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million

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a million

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, on the opposite way

transport

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increase

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increased

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about

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by about

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1,5

million

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Tonws

then

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has been steady, Regarding,

idustry

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industry

start in

the

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apply

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1990 about 5,8

million

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Tones

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and

then

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sharply decreased until the

last

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two years has been

remain

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remaining

remained

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million

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Tones

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air

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pollution,

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total

air

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pollution apply highest in the chart which

begin

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at 1990 mostly 7

million

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Toens and sharply

decrease

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until 3,6

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2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, transport, household, million, tones with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

air pollutants
emissions
decrease
increase
stable
fluctuate
trend
peak
drop
significant
legislation
technological advancements
comparative analysis
contributors
households
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industry
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pattern
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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.Other people say believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss boths views and give your own opinion.

The line graph about the percentage of people in three countries using the Internet between 1999 and 2009.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulosry part of high school programmes. To wat extent do you agree or disagree?