The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie depicts the percentage of reasons behind worldwide
land
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degradation,
while
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the table gives a breakdown of the effects of these causes on
agriculture
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agricultural
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land
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in three regions over the 1990s.
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, overgrazing became the greatest cause of less productive ground over the world.
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,
land
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in Europe decreased their function the most compared to North America and Oceania. When considering global
land
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damage, overgrazing comprised the majority of the main portion at 35%. Trailed by deforestation activities, which were 5% lower than overgrazing, with an exact percentage of 30%. Another reason was over-cultivation reached 28% and other
damage
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damaged
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resources by 7%. Based on regions,
European
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Europe
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contributed the largest
land
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degraded with the massive over-activities in all areas at 23% in total damage.
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, it accounted for 9.8%
in
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deforestation, 7.7%
in over
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cropping, and around 2% lower in overgrazing. Despite Oceania
did
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not
over
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cropping, they had massive grazing grassland at 11.3%
caused
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13% of total ground
a
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minor productive.
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,
North
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in North
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America
in
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all ratio causes remain under 5%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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