The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie depicts the percentage of reasons behind worldwide
land
degradation, Use synonyms
while
the table gives a breakdown of the effects of these causes on Linking Words
agriculture
Replace the word
agricultural
land
in three regions over the 1990s. Use synonyms
Overall
, overgrazing became the greatest cause of less productive ground over the world. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
land
in Europe decreased their function the most compared to North America and Oceania.
When considering global Use synonyms
land
damage, overgrazing comprised the majority of the main portion at 35%. Trailed by deforestation activities, which were 5% lower than overgrazing, with an exact percentage of 30%. Another reason was over-cultivation reached 28% and other Use synonyms
damage
resources by 7%.
Based on regions, Replace the word
damaged
European
contributed the largest Correct your spelling
Europe
land
degraded with the massive over-activities in all areas at 23% in total damage. Use synonyms
Also
, it accounted for 9.8% Linking Words
in
deforestation, 7.7% Change preposition
of
in over
cropping, and around 2% lower in overgrazing. Despite Oceania Change preposition
of
did
not Unnecessary verb
apply
over
cropping, they had massive grazing grassland at 11.3% Change preposition
apply
caused
13% of total groundWrong verb form
causing
a
minor productive. Fix the infinitive
to a
In contrast
, Linking Words
North
America Change preposition
in North
in
all ratio causes remain under 5%.Change preposition
apply
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