The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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situation of an industrial area in Norbiton town and how the site will be developed in the future.

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, there will be a drastic change in the town after implementing the new design. The city contains farmland, a river, and several amounts of factories right now. Since a plan has been made to develop the area, some housing, a school, a playground, shops, and a medical centre will replace the existing infrastructure. Currently, there are 8 industries from the centre to the East side. A river is flowing in the East-West direction with farmland in the North Pole.

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, in the new design, there will be 7 housings facing East, North, and North-West from the main zone though one house will be built on the other side of the river. So, a path will be constructed over the water flow. Some shops and a medical facility will be established close to the central point.

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, a school and

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playground

playgrounds

will be founded in the East direction if the planning is implemented in the upcoming days.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

183 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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