An international company is offering job without pay for good experience write a letter to apply for this job in this letter where did you find this information why you want to apply for this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply
Hello MR Osama , I am very excited to improve my skills in your company . I am writing
this
email in order to tell you more information.
Firstly
, I am looking for a good experience in my major, Therefore
, I joined to Linkdln for
find out the available chances , And Change preposition
apply
then
, I found a job on Linkedin. As you know if you improve your skills in
the beginning of your life , you will get a great job in the future , Change the preposition
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therefore
, I am writing this
email to join with your teamwork .
Secondly
, I am going to tell about
my qualifications , I have Correct pronoun usage
you about
bachelor's
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a bachelor's
in
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an
accounting ,Remove the article
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Also
i
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while
i
was studying at the university.
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Finally
, I want to tell you what kind of job i
want , as Change the capitalization
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i
told you Change the capitalization
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i
should be an accountant , Change the capitalization
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However,
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a finance analyst.
Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you .
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The tone of the letter is polite and appropriately formal for a job application.
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- Yours faithfully,
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- Yours sincerely,
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- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,