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An international company is offering job without pay for good experience write a letter to apply for this job in this letter where did you find this information why you want to apply for this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply

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Hello MR Osama , I am very excited to improve my skills in your company . I am writing
this
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 email in order to tell you more information.
Firstly
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 , I am looking for a good experience in my major,
Therefore
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, I joined to Linkdln
for
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find out the available chances , And
then
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, I found a job on Linkedin. As you know if you improve your skills
in
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 the beginning of your life , you will get a great job in the future ,
therefore
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 , I am writing
this
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 email to join with your teamwork .
Secondly
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, I am going to tell
about
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you about
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 my qualifications , I have
bachelor's
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a bachelor's
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in
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an
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apply
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accounting ,
Also
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i
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I
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 have had intern
while
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i
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 was studying at the university.
Finally
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 , I want to tell you what kind of job
i
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 want , as
i
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 told you
i
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 should be an accountant ,
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However
Add a comma
However,
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i
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 would like to get a position
in
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as
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 a finance analyst. Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you . Osama

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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Organize your points logically with smooth transitions between them.
coherence cohesion
Some sentences can be more concise, which would improve readability and focus.
task achievement
Make sure to thoroughly answer each bullet point in the task.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriately formal for a job application.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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