The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the size of population, birth and

death

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rate

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in England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.

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, the size of

population

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the population

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increased dramatically over the year.

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, the

death

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rate

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and the

death

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rate

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shows

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slightly

same

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the same

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trend. From the beginning

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of the

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graph, three trends

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a slight rise;

however

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, from 1750 the amount of

people

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declined from 10

million

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to approximately 2.5

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. After 1800, the

amount

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of citizens increased gradually and saw 10

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again in 1850.

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it rose to 50

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in 2000. The

rate

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of

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birth in 1700 was 30

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and it was around 4

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more than the

rate

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of

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apply

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death

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. The

number

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of

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people

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who died increased

untill

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until

1750 and it was

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the same

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the

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as the

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number

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of

people

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who were born. Between 1750 and 1800 both

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number

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numbers

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stayed steady.

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, until 1950, the birth

rate

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and the

death

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rate

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shows

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. The

number

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of

people

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who were born inclined to around 34

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and the

number

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of

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who died remained constant at 20

million

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between 1950 and 2000.