The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column graph illustrates the proportion of adults in different age ranges between 2003 and 2006 who overused the
Internet
in their daily routines in Britain.
Overall
,it is clear that
the first
level had excessive use of the Internet
and over 65 people had used the Internet
. We witness that the columns rose in all ages to use the Internet
over time.
It is observed that the first
age group, young adults, has had the most of using the Internet
in comparison with others. It was at four-fifths of the percentage in both 2003 and 2004. Over one year, in 2005, it peaked to
100 per Change preposition
at
cent
. Although
it decreased from 100 per cent
in 2006, its percentage was more than the first
year. In both 25-44 and 45-54, amount of users had gradually increased. The younger group began at 45 per cent
and reached 80 per cent
from 2003 to 2006, respectively, and the senior group started at 60 per cent
and peaked to
80 from during its time.
Change preposition
at
However
, 55-64 and over 65 had increased, but they were slow. The proportion of 55-64 started by a quarter, in 2003. It continued increasingly in 2004 at just over 30 per cent
. Although
descended a little in 2005, it climbed in 2006. In over 65, there were not any users in 2003. The users were added from 2004 to 2006. First
, they were at just over 1 per cent
, but in 2006, they reached 20 per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, first, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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