The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key
informations
about the Change the wording
information
pieces of information
population
size
, birth
rate
and the
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apply
death
rate
. The units are measured in million
. Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Overall
, it is clear from the graph the fact that population
size
had a significant increase
from 1800 to year 2000. In addition
, in 1900 birth
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the birth
rate
and population
size
was
had the same Correct subject-verb agreement
were
rate
whearas
, in 1950 Correct your spelling
whereas
population
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the population
size
show
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showed
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a considrable
considrable
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considerable
considerably
increase
and birth
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the birth
size
droppred
from 30 to less than 25. Correct your spelling
dropped
According to
what is shown, in 1700, birth
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the birth
rate
had the highest rate
30 million and the death
rate
was between population
size
and birth
rate
less than 30 and bigger than 10 in 1750 population
size
increase
and Wrong verb form
increased
birth
and Correct article usage
the birth
death
rate
remained. In termsFix the agreement mistake
rates
of
, in 1900 the highest Change preposition
apply
rate
was population
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a population
size
bigger than 40 million and the smallest rate
was in the death
rate
and the birth
rate
start
to decrease, in 1950 Change the form of the verb
started
population
size
and birth
rate
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
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