The chart below shows the total sales value by product category in one particular store, in a three-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
We have a chart that shows the annual sales value by
product
category in one store. It is devided
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divided
in
three years, 2010, 2011, 2012. The Change preposition
into
product
categories are:
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apply
soaps
, and
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handwash
, shampoos, Fix the agreement mistake
handwashes
showergels
, and hair conditioners.
In 2010 the Correct your spelling
shower gels
soaps
and handwash
sales were bigger than the other products in the same year
, however
it was the Add a comma
however,
year
with less
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fewer
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sales
the
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apply
soaps
and handwash
. The total of money produced was about $150,000. In 2011, they produced $180,000 and in 2012 aproximatelly
$190,000.
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approximately
year
of
the shampoos sold the most was in 2011 sealing $90,000. Change preposition
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Secondly
, the most succesfull
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successful
year
for the shower gels was 2012 with $120,000 and for the hair conditioners was also
2012 with aproximatelly
$80,000.
We can see that the Correct your spelling
approximately
product
that sold the most was the soaps
and handwash
being the product
that sold the most in the three-year
period. The second product
tath
sold the most was the shower gels and the shampoos and hair conditioners are a little bit similar Correct your spelling
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words product, soaps, handwash, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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