The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps represent the current situation in Islip and

planning

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the planning

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for its

further

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development.

Overall

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, the

centre

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of Islip is in simple orientation but there will be

so much

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many

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additions if the new design is implemented. Most of the changes will be made in the

coutryside

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countryside

and several

infrastructure

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infrastructures

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will be built there. It is clear from the figures that the village area is in the North and there are only some shops and a main road right now. All of these will be replaced by

bus

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a bus

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station, shopping

centre

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, car park, new housing, shops, and a road only for pedestrians if the new planning is implemented in the North Pole. Currently, housings are located from the

centre

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to the South but in the upcoming days, new housing will be developed from the

centre

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to the East. Since a dual carriageway will be constructed encircling the whole central area, only

school

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schools

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and other

housings

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housing

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will be outside

this

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way though they are still

in

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at

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the South Pole. A park is located facing the East but

according to

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the new design, the area will be shortened.

Therefore

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, a lot of

drastical

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drastic

change will take place if the planning is implemented accurately.