The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate how an industrial zone is planned to be developed in Norbiton
city
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Overall
, there will be extensive developments with regards
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regard
construction
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the construction
roads
in
the industrial site.
Currently, the town is solely occupied by factories located along the Change preposition
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roads
. To the north of the city, there is farmland separated by a river, but there is currently no access to go there as the roads
only connect to a central roundabout.
According to
the plans, all the factories will be replaced with housing and common facilities. On the eastern side of the larger roundabout, a
new housing will be built, Remove the article
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as well as
a playground constructed between two blocks of houses and a school at the end
of the street. A medical centre is also
planned to be built opposite the shop in the bottom-right corner, located between two circular roads
. In the future, additional houses also
erected next to the farmland, and access to the farm will be provided via a new street constructed over a river.Submitted by nineband9s on
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