The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how an industrial zone is planned to be developed in Norbiton
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.
Overall
, there will be extensive developments with
regards
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to
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of buildings, facilities and
roads
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the industrial site. Currently, the town is solely occupied by factories located along the
roads
. To the north of the city, there is farmland separated by a river, but there is currently no access to go there as the
roads
only connect to a central roundabout.
According to
the plans, all the factories will be replaced with housing and common facilities. On the eastern side of the larger roundabout,
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new housing will be built,
as well as
a playground constructed between two blocks of houses and a school
at the end
of the street. A medical centre is
also
planned to be built opposite the shop in the bottom-right corner, located between two circular
roads
. In the future, additional houses
also
erected next to the farmland, and access to the farm will be provided via a new street constructed over a river.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words roads with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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