The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The data table and pie charts provide an overview of the
number
and gender distribution of domestic and overseas
research
students
at Australian universities between 2001 and 2010. Generally, despite a substantial increase in the
number
of
students
pursuing
research
at Australian universities between 2001 and 2010, the majority remained domestic.
Furthermore
, male
students
predominated at the universities during
this
period.
According to
the table, in 2001, nearly 34,000
research
students
were Australian, significantly higher than the
number
of international
students
, which was approximately 5,200. Over time, the
research
field attracted more
students
. Specifically, by 2010, the
number
of domestic
students
had increased to around 40,000 compared to about 15,000 international
students
. As illustrated in the pie charts, local
students
constituted 87% of the total, comprising 44% of males and 43% of females in 2001. At that time, international
students
made up only 13%, with 9% of males. Over the subsequent nine years, the percentages of both local male and female
students
decreased, with 38% of males and 35% of females, resulting in an
overall
reduction of 6%.
In contrast
, the proportion of non-local male
students
increased slightly to 12%, still lower than the proportion of non-local female
students
, which was 15%.
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