The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
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The provided charts illustrate the proportion of individuals who took part in different voluntary
organizations
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in 2008 and 2014. It is noticeable that volunteers preferred joining educational
organizations
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in 2008,
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environmental
organizations
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were the most
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category
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in 2014. In 2008, the figure for educational
organizations
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made up 24%, making
this
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category
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the highest figure,
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however
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the
percentage
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of
this
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option witnessed a decrease to 17% in 2014. Environmental
organizations
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ranked second in 2008, which accounted for 21%.
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voluntary option experienced a growth
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roughly a
third,
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at 29%. The opposite trend can be seen for the
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of the
others group
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, at 15% in the former year and 9% in the latter year. Regarding the remaining voluntary groups, the
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of people who chose
sport
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organizations
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was 15% in 2008, after a six-year period,
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percentage
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showed an increase to 25%.
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, there was a slight decrease in the
percentage
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of art
category
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, from 18% in 2008 to 12% in 2014.
Health
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The health
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care
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was the least popular in both statistical years, at 7% and 8% respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words organizations, category, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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