The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The plan illustrates a work facility area of Norbiton town and the forthcoming site design project.

Overall

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that

Correct word choice

apply

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the eventual plan is

fully

Correct article usage

a fully

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reimagined townscape, containing

much

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many

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more buildings, including housing and the route over the river,

whereas

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the factory is the only thing presented on the current map.

First,

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industrial facilities will be fully demolished, so the living area could be built

instead

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. It is seen, that the additional roundabout could be added as a road extension to the north, which leads to the farmland over the river through the county.

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, a new medical

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center

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centre

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and some shops are planned to

be build

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be built

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between two roundabouts at the

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center

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centre

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Additionally

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, it is a playground near the medical

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center

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centre

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, which is surrounded by living blocks. An old road leads straight to a brand new school which is to the west of the

center

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words center with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

144 words

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