The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The plan illustrates a work facility area of Norbiton town and the forthcoming site design project.
Overall
, that
the eventual plan is Correct word choice
apply
fully
reimagined townscape, containing Correct article usage
a fully
much
more buildings, including housing and the route over the river, Fix the agreement mistake
many
whereas
the factory is the only thing presented on the current map.
First,
industrial facilities will be fully demolished, so the living area could be built instead
. It is seen, that the additional roundabout could be added as a road extension to the north, which leads to the farmland over the river through the county. Furthermore
, a new medical center
and some shops are planned to Change the spelling
centre
be build
between two roundabouts at the Change the verb form
be built
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Additionally
, it is a playground near the medical center
, which is surrounded by living blocks. An old road leads straight to a brand new school which is to the west of the Change the spelling
centre
center
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