The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The plan illustrates a work facility area of Norbiton town and the forthcoming site design project.

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that

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apply

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the eventual plan is

fully

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a fully

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reimagined townscape, containing

much

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many

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more buildings, including housing and the route over the river,

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the factory is the only thing presented on the current map.

First,

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industrial facilities will be fully demolished, so the living area could be built

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. It is seen, that the additional roundabout could be added as a road extension to the north, which leads to the farmland over the river through the county.

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, a new medical

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center

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centre

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and some shops are planned to

be build

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be built

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between two roundabouts at the

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center

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centre

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, it is a playground near the medical

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center

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centre

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, which is surrounded by living blocks. An old road leads straight to a brand new school which is to the west of the

center

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

144 words

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