The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph shows wheat
exports
in 3 different regions -
Austtralia
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Australia
, Canada, and
European
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the European
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Community
during
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from
show examples
1985-
1990
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to 1990
show examples
.
Overall
, It is clearly seen that the
trend
of wheat
exports
in
European
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the European
show examples
Community is increasing, but in Canada and
Australia
, it is
opposite
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the opposite
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and the
trend
is gradually decreasing. In Canada, at the beginning of the period of time, the indicators show approximately 20 million
tones
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tonnes
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. In 1988, the sales of wheat
are
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were at
show examples
their peak point and it
is
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was
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about 25 million.
At the end
of
this
time
that is
going down and is about 18.
This
trend
is similar
for
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to
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Australia
.
Exports
of
Australia
are the fewest at the beginning and
at the end
. In
Australia
, the indicators are going down most of the time. European Community has been developing its
exports
, and it affects the line. In Europe, though the sales are not the highest from the start, in
final
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the final
show examples
results, the line shows the most numbers. The
trend
is gradually going up and
at the end
, the
numbers
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number
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of
export
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exports
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are
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is
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about 21 million.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, trend, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • rise
  • surpass
  • modest growth
  • significant
  • stability
  • comparisons
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