The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A 2019 study examining the primary reasons for remote
work
and weekly
work
hours
, segmented by gender, revealed several key insights. Working from home has become an increasingly popular option for many individuals, driven by various motivations. For both genders, the primary reason for remote
work
is to save money on commuting costs and other
work
-related expenses.
However
, there are notable gender differences in the other top reasons for remote
work
.
While
increased productivity is the second most popular reason for both genders, it is prioritized more by
males
than
females
. For
females
, easier childcare ranks as the second most significant reason,
whereas
it is a less prominent factor for
males
. In conclusion,
males
prioritized productivity,
while
females
focused on childcare; and
males
worked more
hours
from home (over 30
hours
),
while
females
worked fewer
hours
from home (under 10
hours
)
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  • commute
  • flexible schedule
  • family responsibilities
  • gender roles
  • professional duties
  • societal trends
  • economic responsibility
  • home-working hours
  • traditional roles
  • male-dominated industries
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