The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European

country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph shows the
production
of
timber
as well as
paper
and
pulp
in one European country from 1980 to 2000.
Although
there were fluctuations,
overall
, the
production
of
pulp
was consistently more than
timber
and
paper
. The general trend was to move away from
pulp
and
paper
as
timber
became the dominant product in the
production
of the forest industry. In the first decade, the
pulp
was produced in significantly higher quantities than other industries listed. Despite an initial sharp fall to approximately 2
million
tonnes
, it
then
recovered, reaching a high of close to 7
million
tonnes
.
However
, from 1990, its
production
increased almost consistently to 8
million
tonnes
, and the
production
exceeded 10
million
in 2000. The trend for
timber
doubled from 5
million
tonnes
in 1980, reaching approximately 10
million
tonnes
in 1985,
although
this
peak was not maintained, falling to nearly 8
million
tonnes
in 2000.
In contrast
,
paper
climbed from 4
million
tonnes
to 6
million
tonnes
before reaching its peak at 12
million
in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, timber, paper, pulp, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Timber production
  • Pulp production
  • Paper production
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Technological advances
  • Demand
  • Market demand
  • Sustainable practices
  • Deforestation
  • Production levels
  • Comparisons
  • Trends
  • Policy changes
  • Patterns
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