The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph shows the
production
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of
timber
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as well as
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paper
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and
pulp
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in one European country from 1980 to 2000.
Although
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there were fluctuations,
overall
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, the
production
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of
pulp
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was consistently more than
timber
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and
paper
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. The general trend was to move away from
pulp
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and
paper
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as
timber
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became the dominant product in the
production
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of the forest industry. In the first decade, the
pulp
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was produced in significantly higher quantities than other industries listed. Despite an initial sharp fall to approximately 2
million
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tonnes
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, it
then
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recovered, reaching a high of close to 7
million
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tonnes
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.
However
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, from 1990, its
production
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increased almost consistently to 8
million
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tonnes
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, and the
production
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exceeded 10
million
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in 2000. The trend for
timber
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doubled from 5
million
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tonnes
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in 1980, reaching approximately 10
million
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tonnes
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in 1985,
although
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this
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peak was not maintained, falling to nearly 8
million
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tonnes
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in 2000.
In contrast
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,
paper
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climbed from 4
million
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tonnes
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to 6
million
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tonnes
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before reaching its peak at 12
million
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in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, timber, paper, pulp, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Timber production
  • Pulp production
  • Paper production
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Technological advances
  • Demand
  • Market demand
  • Sustainable practices
  • Deforestation
  • Production levels
  • Comparisons
  • Trends
  • Policy changes
  • Patterns
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