The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 and 2000

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 and 2000
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The line graph Illustrates two decades of
production
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differences between timber,
pulp
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and
paper
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which are products of the forest
industry
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in a European country.
Although
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there were fluctuations,
overall
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, all types of
production
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increased during the period and the general trend was to move away from
pulp
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and timber as
paper
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became the dominant
industry
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in
this
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category. At the beginning of the period,
pulp
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was the most produced forest
industry
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. Despite a sharp fall to approximately 2.5
million
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tonnes
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in the quarter of the first decade, It
then
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tried to recover but could not handle it even with 7
million
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tonnes
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of
production
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.
However
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, there was
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slight change in
pulp
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manufacturing between 1985 and 1997 after that year it
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rocked growth until the end and reached around 10
million
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tonnes
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. Even though, timber
production
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doubled in 1985 and reached own highest point of 10
million
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tonnes
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of output,
at the end
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of the period it became the lowest-produced forest
industry
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product with almost 7.5
million
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tonnes
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.
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,
paper
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production
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was the lowest one in the beginning with 4
million
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tonnes
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and
production
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climbed confidently
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took the lead from around 1994 onwards. By 2000
paper
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manufacturing had exceeded all previous rates and reached approximately 12
million
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tonnes
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of
production
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, pulp, paper, industry, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Timber production
  • Pulp production
  • Paper production
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Technological advances
  • Demand
  • Market demand
  • Sustainable practices
  • Deforestation
  • Production levels
  • Comparisons
  • Trends
  • Policy changes
  • Patterns
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