The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (COz) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
graph
illustrates the carbon
dioxide
emissions in metric tonnes
per person
in five different cities between 1967 and 2007.
overall
, people in Italy and Portugal showed Correct article usage
an increased
increased
in the emissions Replace the word
increase
carbon
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of carbon
dioxide
from 1967 till 2007. while
public
in Add an article
the public
United
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the United
kingdom
and Sweden showed Capitalize word
Kingdom
decreased
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a decreased
pattern
of carbon
dioxide
emission
.
In Portugal, the graph
gradual increase in CO2 emissions, from 1967, which was around three metric tonnes
to 1997 which was almost five metric tonnes
. Then
the graph
remained steady til 2007 with the same metric tonnes
.
carbon
dioxide
emission
per person
in United
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the United
kingdom
was highest in 1967, starting from almost eleven Capitalize word
Kingdom
tonnes
and showed decreasing
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a decreasing
pattern
and ended with nine metric tonnes
per person
in the year 2007.however
, still remained on
the top in 2007 among other countries.
The Change preposition
at
pattern
of carbon
dioxide
emission
per person
in Sweden,
started from Nine metric Remove the comma
apply
tonnes
per person
in 1967 and showed rapid
surge in Add an article
a rapid
emission
rates in the year 1977, whith
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with
which
average
rate of eleven Correct article usage
an average
tonnes
. Then
the graph
showed rapid
decline till 1987 with seven Correct article usage
a rapid
tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
emission
per person
and afterwards stayedingradual decreasing pattern
till 2007 and ended around
five metric Change preposition
with around
tonnes
of carbon
dioxide
emission
.
Italy showed rapid
surge from 1967 to 1977 and Correct article usage
a rapid
remaid
steady till 2007 with seven metric Correct your spelling
remained
remain
tonnes
per person
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