The graph shows the production three forest industry production in European country, such as timber, pulp and paper, from 1980 to 2000

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three

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of three

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forest industry

production

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products

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in European

country

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countries

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,

such

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as timber,

pulp

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and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

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there were fluctuations,

overall

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people in

this

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country used

pulp

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and pepper more than timber, and the general trend was to away from

pulp

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and timber as paper

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the dominant in

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category In the first

decade

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pulp

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had the highest rates, but in 1983 it fell sharply to 2

tons

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. In 1985 it recovered to 6.5

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and continued to grow until 2000.

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the wood completely opposite position

pulp

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It

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was in the middle but rose very sharply. In 1986 it reached 10

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. But it fell sharply and continued to fall until the end

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, Papers it was at the very bottom, climbed from 4

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and continued to grow until the end. In 2000 it reached 12

tons

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. By the

end

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it dominated the rest and was in the leaders