The line graph illustrates the percentage of audiences in UK who listen to radio and watch TV during the day from October to December 1992
The picture given above gives information about the proportions of UK residents who listened to the
radio
or watched Use synonyms
TV
during a day in two months, October and December, in 1992.
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To begin
with, from the late hours of the Linking Words
night
until 5 am, the audiences of both communication tools were the lowest compared to other day times; they oscillated around 5 Use synonyms
percent
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per cent
However
, from 7 to 9 am, the trend of Linking Words
radio
soared suddenly to 25% before it plummeted to 10% until the afternoon. Use synonyms
Then
it negligibly increased for an hour by 5 pm, and it fell gradually and stopped at 5 Linking Words
percent
at midnight Change the spelling
per cent
night
.
The proportion of those who preferred Use synonyms
TV
, fluctuated by 11 am when it commenced its growing trend, it surpassed the Use synonyms
radio
curve at 15% at 13 pm. Plateauing for two hours at the same rate, it skyrocketed and touched its maximum, nearly 50%, in the early hours of Use synonyms
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night
. following an immediate reduction, it plunged to 20 Add an article
the night
percent
after 23 pm.
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per cent
Overall
, Linking Words
radio
and Use synonyms
TV
absorbed their audiences at different times during the day. Use synonyms
Although
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,
more people tended to listen to the Remove the comma
apply
radio
in the morning, people often watched Use synonyms
TV
at Use synonyms
night
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