The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart shows what people did after graduating from anthropology at one university,
although
it shows their salaries.
Overall
, from what the chart gives after 5 years, there are three different types of employment: freelance consultants, government sector, and private companies, and as shown, freelance consultants have the highest salary among all of them. 52% of graduate students are full-time workers;
however
, part-time employees come second with 15% not a lot of people decide what they want to do after graduation easily, which is why 8% do not know what they did after, 12% of the students didn't find a job after finishing school. The salary for freelance consultants, 40% of them were getting paid 1000000+, 50% of the government sector were getting paid the same in concert only 30% of private companies were getting paid 1000000+,
otherwise
10% of private companies were getting paid 2500-4999.
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