The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates what proportion of an average Australian household uses energy. The Use synonyms
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compares how energy use correlates with greenhouse gas emissions.
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, heating is used the most. In the Use synonyms
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, water heating is ranked Use synonyms
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. Cooling is the least used in both figures.
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with 42%. After that, water heating ranks Use synonyms
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with 30%, which is twice as large as the other appliances (15%). The proportion of lighting is 4%, Use synonyms
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cooling is half as high, at 2%, which is the lowest. In the Linking Words
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, with 32% and 28%, respectively. Refrigeration is almost equal to heating, at 14% and 15%, respectively. Cooling ranks Use synonyms
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lighting is just over three times as large, at 8%.Linking Words
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