The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
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pie
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illustrates what proportion of an average Australian household uses energy. The
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chart
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compares how energy use correlates with greenhouse gas emissions.
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, in the
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, heating is used the most. In the
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chart
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, water heating is ranked
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. Cooling is the least used in both figures. In the
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, heating ranks
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with 42%. After that, water heating ranks
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with 30%, which is twice as large as the other appliances (15%). The proportion of lighting is 4%,
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cooling is half as high, at 2%, which is the lowest. In the
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, water heating and other appliances rank
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, with 32% and 28%, respectively. Refrigeration is almost equal to heating, at 14% and 15%, respectively. Cooling ranks
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with 3%,
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lighting is just over three times as large, at 8%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words first, chart, second with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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