The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
first
pie chart
illustrates what proportion of an average Australian household uses energy. The second
chart
compares how energy use correlates with greenhouse gas emissions.
Overall
, in the first
chart
, heating is used the most. In the second
chart
, water heating is ranked first
. Cooling is the least used in both figures.
In the first
chart
, heating ranks first
with 42%. After that, water heating ranks second
with 30%, which is twice as large as the other appliances (15%). The proportion of lighting is 4%, while
cooling is half as high, at 2%, which is the lowest. In the second
chart
, water heating and other appliances rank first
and second
, with 32% and 28%, respectively. Refrigeration is almost equal to heating, at 14% and 15%, respectively. Cooling ranks last
with 3%, while
lighting is just over three times as large, at 8%.Submitted by negar.tehranii1998 on
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