The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the difference between the look of Westley town in 1815 compared to the present times.
Overall
, the area changed thanks to the addition of new residential and business areas and the depletion of Linking Words
overall
greenery like trees and fields. Linking Words
On the contrary
, commodities like the town hall and the market square have not gone through any changes.
In detail, compared to the state of the town in 1815 many buildings have changed, including the Coach Inn being replaced by the Sport Centre Linking Words
as well as
the West Gate Shopping Centre being built in place of the church. The Red Lion and Lenton Hotel have been placed Linking Words
instead
of Lord Westley's House.
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Lastly
, new roads have been placed connecting the housing areas. Linking Words
Additionally
, there has been a new way of transportation introduced - a railway in place of a road with a bridge. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there have been new amenities like the cinema, museum, and railway station.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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