The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart illustrates the share of families owning and renting where they lived in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
,
households
in rented accommodation declined over the timeframe, with the exception of a rise in the final year.
However
,
households
in owned accommodation increased in the timespan except for the final year, which had a decline. It is evident that the share of families who lived in their house was nearly 25 per
cent
in 1918 and grew continuously to hit its peak, which was approximately 70 per
cent
in 2001.
Then
, it had a fall in 2011 to attain nearly 65 per
cent
.
Moreover
,
households
before 1971 lived more in rented places,
although
after
this
year they lived in owned ones.
Additionally
, half of the families lived in a place owned by them, and the other half lived in rented ones in 1971. It is clearly seen that the proportion of
households
living in rented accommodation was about 75 per
cent
in 1918 and decreased constantly to reach the minimum share, which was about 30 per
cent
in 2001.
Therefore
, it had an upward trend to attain nearly 35 percent in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • accommodation
  • trend
  • shift
  • households
  • homeownership
  • economic and social circumstances
  • interwar period
  • post-World War II
  • government policies
  • urbanization
  • public policy
  • economic prosperity
  • tipping point
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