International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your position
It
is often argue
that having international sporting tournaments is expensive and Change the verb form
is often argued
cause
issues Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
to
the sponsored Change preposition
for
country
. I Use synonyms
stongly
disagree with Correct your spelling
strongly
this
statement because these Linking Words
events
help to enhance Use synonyms
performance
of athletics and improve Add an article
the performance
tourism
industry. Add an article
the tourism
This
essay will explore how these points will justify my opinion.
There are several benefits of having sporting Linking Words
events
in a Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it positively reinforces Linking Words
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
indiviuals
to practice more and they will Correct your spelling
individuals
encourage
because they know that the ground support Wrong verb form
be encouraged
always
on their side. Add a missing verb
is always
As a result
, their performance will increase dramatically. Linking Words
For instance
, in 2008, Linking Words
chinees
Olympic Correct your spelling
Chinese
athletics
won more medals than the USA Replace the word
athletes
becuase
the Olympics Correct your spelling
because
held
in China Add a missing verb
were held
in
Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
this
year and they had Correct determiner usage
that
a huge ground advantages
.
Another reason why international sporting games provide benefits to hosting Correct the article-noun agreement
a huge ground advantage
huge ground advantages
Use synonyms
country
is that it helps to increase revenue from tourism because Fix the agreement mistake
countries
a lots
of visitors from various nations will come Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
for watching
these Change preposition
to watch
events
. They pay for hotels and spend money on numerous Use synonyms
actvities
which drastically improve the economy of the Correct your spelling
activities
country
. Use synonyms
Further
, there are collateral benefits Linking Words
such
as people from Linking Words
host
Correct article usage
the host
nation
can meet and greet Fix the agreement mistake
nations
with
different tourists and share their knowledge about their countries. As an example, my friend who is Change preposition
apply
French
citizen met her Australian Correct article usage
a French
girl friend
at Paris Correct your spelling
girlfriend
Olympic
in 2024.
In conclusion, international sports Fix the agreement mistake
Olympics
events
provide Use synonyms
a huge advancements
Correct the article-noun agreement
huge advancements
a huge advancement
to
host Change preposition
for to
country
, improve its Use synonyms
athletic's
performances and improve Change noun form
athletic
tourism
industry. So, I believe that every Add an article
the tourism
country
should have a chance to conduct an Use synonyms
internation
Correct your spelling
international
sport
games in their Change the noun form
sports
country
at least one time.Use synonyms
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introduction
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logical structure
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea, and use more varied linking words and phrases to smoothly connect your ideas.
relevant specific examples
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introduction conclusion present
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which frames your argument well.
complete response
You have addressed the task by discussing both the benefits of international sporting events and providing reasons for your opinion.
supported main points
You provided relevant examples, such as the 2008 Olympics in China and personal anecdotes from the Olympic experience in Paris, which add depth to your argument.
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