Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?
The debate over whether increasing fuel costs is the most efficient way to deal with the ever-rising traffic congestion and rocketed pollutant emissions is a longstanding one. I believe that before planning to solve
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idea is unsuitable for many societies.
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, the surge in petrol expenses might imperatively affect lower-income individuals who rely on utilising their private vehicles for work. Many people in metropolitan cities Linking Words
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Clarify the thesis statement in the introduction to make it more explicit whether you agree or disagree with the given statement.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence to guide the reader and maintain focus.
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Provide more specific examples or evidence to support each method mentioned in the essay for a stronger argument.
coherence cohesion
The essay provides a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
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Multiple alternative solutions to the problem of traffic and pollution are discussed, showing a comprehensive approach.
coherence cohesion
Ideas are presented logically, with clear connections between the paragraphs.