The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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and females, aged between 60 and 64, in 4 specific nations who had jobs in the years 1970 and 2001.

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, more men were employed compared to

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in both years. The percentage of men over 60, who were employed, decreased in all four countries, from 1970 to 2000,

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the female population showed

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pattern with only minor changes. Japan had the highest proportion of

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that were working , with 84% and 76% respectively in the

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1970 and 2001.In 1970, around

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of

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over 60 in Australia, the United States and Belgium were employed ,

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number reduced significantly to 47% for Australia, 55% for America and just 19% for Belgium in 2000. Compared to

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, employment in

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the female

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population remained relatively stable. Japan had the highest number of females that were employed in both

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, with 43% and 40%

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respectively

. Belgium was the country where female

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employment

was the least hovering just under one tenth in both years.