You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain your situation Say why you feel unsure about living in the city Ask some questions about life in the city

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Hi Selen, How are you and your family ? Have your kids

start

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started

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to go to the

scool

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school

? I have missed you ! Anyway, I have some news,

last

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week I

have

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had

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an offer for a new job. Guess what ? The job is in your

living

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apply

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city so I have some

question

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questions

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about it. You know, I haven't been before there and I have some hesitation. I have to move there and find a

renting

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rental

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house. Actually, I am not sure about living and accepting

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offer.

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, is living

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this

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in this

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city expensive ? How much money can I find a house ?

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, I wonder

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if that

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that

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the

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jobs

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job

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location is near the living area and

transportation

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if transportation

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are

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useful or strong. If I move there, will I bored ? Because, you know I am

very

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social person and I would like to travel anywhere. I know my questions are a lot. But

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choice is very important for me. My life way would be changed. Anyway, I am looking forward to hearing your answers and I am going to decide

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this

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offer

due to

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your return. Love, Kevser

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coherence cohesion

Try to organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, so each paragraph focuses on a single point or question you have.

task achievement

Ensure that the questions you ask are specific and directly relate to your concerns about the city.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a warm and friendly greeting and closing.

task achievement

Your letter explains your situation clearly and asks relevant questions about the city.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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