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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the annual
thefts
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 per
thousand
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 transportation in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, Great Britain experienced a slight decline,
while
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 Sweden saw a sharp upward trend. Meanwhile, France and Canada remained relatively stable in their final years. Great Britain started with approximately 17
thefts
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 per
thousand
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 cars in 1990, being the highest among the four countries. Despite fluctuations over the decade, it only slightly decreased to about 16
thefts
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 per
thousand
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 vehicles in 1999, peaking at 20 in 1996.
Conversely
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, Sweden witnessed a significant increase in vehicle
thefts
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, starting at only 8 in 1990 to reaching nearly 14
thefts
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 per
thousand
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 cars annually by 1999. Simultaneously, France and Canada fluctuated between 6 and 7 burglaries per
thousand
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 transporations throughout the decade but stayed constant at around 6
thefts
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 per
thousand
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 vehicles by 1999.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words thefts, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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