The first pie chart shows the percentage of water used for six products in 2004. The second chart illustrates the percentage of total income from products in 2004

The first pie chart shows the percentage of water used for six products in 2004. The second chart illustrates the percentage of total income from products in 2004
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The pie charts show the proportion of
water
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used to produce various
products
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and the revenue these
products
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generated in 2004.
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,
whereas
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vegetables and
then
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fruits were the biggest consumers of
water
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, other crops put together used just around a quarter of
water
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. It is
also
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clear that fruits brought in the most
income
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, followed by vegetables, with the remaining
products
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producing less than 20% of total
income
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. Examining the
products
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which required a lot of
water
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, the preponderance of
water
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was used to grow vegetables at 46%, though
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crop only accounted for 31% of total
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.
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, fruits were the most profitable product generating 40% of the revenue,
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consuming much less
water
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(28%). The third biggest consumer of
water
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was cereal, using 12% of
water
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and producing the same percentage of
income
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. The other
products
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exhibited much smaller figures for
water
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usage and financial returns. Lime production consumed 8% of
water
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, contributing a similar proportion of
income
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. The remaining two crops – rice and dandelion – required a similar percentage of
water
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(3%), but they yielded vastly different amounts of earnings: the former merely 1% and the latter 8%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, products, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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