The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.
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The given table illustrates the
number
of temporary migrant
workers
in four different countries (
Australia
, New
Zealand
, the
UK
, and the
USA
) in two different years 2003 and 2006 and the
number
of
workers
per 1000
people
in these four countries in 2006.
Overall
, in two different years, in all five countries, the
number
of temporary migrant
workers
increased. In
Australia
and New
Zealand
, the
number
of temporary migrant
workers
per 1000
people
were
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high compared to the
number
of migrant
workers
in the
UK
and in the
USA
. In 2003, in
Australia
, the
number
of temporary migrant
workers
were
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152,000, and in 2006, it increased and reached 219,000. In the
UK
, in 2003, the
number
of temporary migrant
workers
were
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137,000. Meanwhile, in 2006, it became almost doubled and there were 266,000 migrant
workersin
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workers in
the
UK
.
Likewise
, In terms of the
USA
, there were 577,000 migrant
workers
in 2003, and in 2006, it increased and showed 678,000
workers
. In
Australia
, there were 10.7
workers
per 1000
people
in 2006. In terms of New
Zealand
, there were 21.1 migrant
workers
per 1000
people
.
Moreover
, In 2006, compared to
Australia
and New
Zealand
, in the
UK
and in the
USA
, there were only 4.4 and 2.3
workers
per 1000
people
respectively.
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