;=The table below shows the percentage of participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015./
The given table illustrates the
percentage
of participation of female
in senior management Fix the agreement mistake
females
positions
in three different companies (Eldan Ltd
, Bamforth Ltd
and Finsbury Ltd
) in
every Change preposition
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five
years
between 1975 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that the percentage
of women
in senior roles has been
increased throughout the period except for Finsbury Unnecessary verb
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Ltd
, where in 1980 and 2000, the percentage
of women
employees
decreased.
In the year 1975 and 1980, in Eldan Ltd
, there were only 3% of women
employees
in the senior positions
. Every five
years
, it increased gradually, and in 2015, there were 64% women
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of women
employees
in senior roles, which was the highest among all comapnies
. In terms of Bamforth Correct your spelling
companies
Ltd
, there were
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2
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a 2
of
increase in the number of Change preposition
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women
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women's
positions
in five
years
from 1975 to 2000, and it increased from 9% to 17%. Moreover
, in 2000, 46% of women
employees
were in that company in senior positions
.
In terms of Finsbury Ltd
, 16% of women
employees
were there in the year 1975, while
it decreased by 2% and reached 14% after five
years
in 1980. Then
, in the next five
years
, the percentage
of women
increased by 1% and reached 15%. In 2000, the percentage
of women
again decreased and reached 20%. In the next 5 years
, it again increased and reached at
28%.Remove the preposition
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