You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.
Hello MR Osama ,I hope you are doing well . I am Osama Mezal who rented your flat 10 months ago , I got some problems in
this
city ,Therefore
, I would like to leave earlier two months than the contract .
I want to inquire if i
can move the flat before the end of the contract , I don't have any wrong thing in your flat . Change the capitalization
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However
, I got
an emergency condition because my wife is pregnant Verb problem
have
Also
she will born next month ,So I had better move near to her , Moreover
, I want to discover the country before i
leave . I can give you half the rent for two months or Change the capitalization
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also
if you want i
can look for someone to rent the flat Change the capitalization
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instead
of me .
Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you .Submitted by osama.mezal7 on
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task achievement
Clarify the issues you've encountered in the city for better reader understanding.
coherence cohesion
Use separate paragraphs for each main point to enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Clear initiation and closure of the letter.
task achievement
Expressed flexibility and willingness to accommodate the agency's needs.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,