The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart displays the proportion of Australians working in 5 sectors over the given
50 year
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period.
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, the number of
people
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related to services increased,
whereas
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in manufacturing and agriculture their numbers decreased.
Also
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, more
people
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were related to
service
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the service
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sector than any other industry, in Australia, throughout the given time. !
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In
1962, more than half of the
people
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were involved in services.
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number inclined steadily for the next four decades,
then
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remained there for the next 10 years, to just below 80% by 2012.
On the other hand
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,
in1962
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in 1962
, almost 25% and just above 10% of Australians were in manufacturing and agriculture respectively.
People
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working in these sectors reduced to less than half
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2012, of what they were 50 years back.
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,
people
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involved in construction and mining were almost 10% and roughly 2% respectively. Their figures remained relatively
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till the end
in
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of
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2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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