Nowadays,the issue of dependency on computer
in the area of
,medicine and transport is a controversial one.
some argue that it has various negative impacts
sectors,many argue that our
has transformed into its most developed era through
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.I,personally,believe that media
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advanced means of travelling are the byproducts of a range of
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with,media
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internal and external relationships.As most
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now busy with their jobs and have less time to meet physically with others,so social platforms help them to maintain that communication.
,many believe that
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a global village
social media platforms.
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in the
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or the like.
,
is crucial to keep up
bonding between
.
,in terms of medical coding,hospital administration can maintain all the
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records and their critical diseases.Since
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researchers need access to all
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information to produce various medicines and antibiotics,these
data have
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in medical treatment.What is more,scientists may not be able to do any work in their laboratories without
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of computers.
,
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pandemic disease that
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in every country of the
and scientists created vaccines against it within
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months
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the application of advanced
.
,digital aids are the main factor
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these
.
,rapid speed transports or aviation
are the major contributions of computer science and its
,which in turn,leads to convenient and
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travelling
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in the globe.To exemplify it
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,a dramatic large electric train can take thousands of passengers in
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single travelling.
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cities,
can commute within
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times and in
it plays a crucial role in time savings.
In conclusion,it is undeniable that the vital role of computers in all aspects of human lives
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in medical treatments,various ways of transport systems and creating
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.
,some may
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disagree with
some exceptional reasons,but in my opinion,these benefits are fully for the side of humans.