The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the
unemployment
rates
of male and female graduates aged 20–24 in one European country from January 2008 to October
2009.
Overall
, unemployment
rates
fluctuated over the period for both genders, but men generally had higher rates
of unemployment
than women, with a sharp increase in October
2008 and October
2009.
In January 2008, the unemployment
rates
for men and women were relatively low, at around 10% and 7%, respectively. These rates
remained fairly stable until July 2008, when both saw a slight increase. However
, by October
2008, there was a significant spike in unemployment
for men, reaching around 16%, while
the rate for women rose more moderately to about 11%.
In 2009, the unemployment
rates
fluctuated again, starting lower in January and April before rising sharply in July and October
. By October
2009, male unemployment
peaked at nearly 25%, while
the female rate also
increased substantially, reaching around 15%.
In summary, male graduates consistently faced higher unemployment
, with both genders experiencing notable increases in late 2009.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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