You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

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Good morning Mr Walker I hope you are doing well, well I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the post which was on our university's notice board.
However
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currently
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I am a student at Loren Brusque University where
i
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am studying Business Administration and graduating next year so I am
also
trying to find a better job.
Moreover
, I will be glad to tell you that I
also
have 2 years of experience in
this
same field at Burger King, Well I know all the duties and responsibilities of the Quality Assurance Manager. The main reason for leaving my previous job is the work environment over there. The work environment is so toxic so
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decided to leave there. Can you please provide me with more detail regarding
this
post so I can proceed
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Thank you
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task achievement
Expand on why your past experience makes you well-suited for the role. Provide specific examples or skills developed in your previous job and how they relate to the responsibilities of a Quality Assurance Manager.
coherence and cohesion
Be more concise in your reasoning and differentiate between each point clearly. Improve transitions between ideas to ensure smoother flow and coherence.
coherence and cohesion
Polite greeting and closing show a good command of formal letter writing style.
task achievement
Shows a clear interest in the position and outlines educational and professional background.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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