The pie charts provide information about the online market sales in the categories of
travel
, film and music , books and clothes as well Use synonyms
in
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as in
unique
country Add an article
a unique
which
named New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013.
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apply
Overall
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it is clear that
in the first diagram that was seen the highest point of clothes and the lowest experienced category of books in online trade Linking Words
while
in 2013 high number of sales in Linking Words
travel
witnessed a leading position.
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of
increases first that Change preposition
at
was
books and film/ music sectors. Both two figures Change the verb form
were
was
from 19% and 21% in the first year to 22% and 33% respectively.
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were
of
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for
cloth
and Correct your spelling
clothes
travel
in 2003 , clothes demonstrated the highest point with about 24% after rapidly Use synonyms
decreased
by roughly 8%. Wrong verb form
decreasing
In contrast
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
travel
sector accounted for the greatest proportion of Correct article usage
the travel
total
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the total
marked
share on the Correct your spelling
market
internet
in 2003 . Capitalize word
Internet
However
, it declined moderately to 29% in 2013.Linking Words
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