Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear

sir

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Sir

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/mam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you regarding the issue I am facing

from

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with

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I phone

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iPhone

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13. I was very excited to purchase it additional you satisfied me that it is a limited edition. Though I am having

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serious trouble with

this

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edition

oftenly

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often

it never connects my calls to anyone and

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moreover

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moreover,

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it turns off after that. I seeking

for

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apply

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a refund

although

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I disbursed

extra

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an extra

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300 dollars for that. I am not blaming you because I believe

its

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it's

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malfunctioning but without a

doubt

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doubt,

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I will be at your store by 9 am

and

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apply

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secondly

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make sure my new phone works properly before you hand over it to me. Thanks Yours faithful Umar

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on organizing ideas into separate paragraphs to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

Use a more formal tone when addressing the retailer, such as avoiding colloquial expressions like 'though.'

Task Achievement

The letter clearly explains the issue with the purchased item and requests a refund.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal complaint letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

119 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

disappointed
product quality
malfunction
defective
warranty
receipt
customer service
return policy
refund
exchange
inconvenience
consumer rights
acknowledgment
courier
postage
compensation
defective
resolution
turnaround time
escalation

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Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

lt is suggested that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others suggest the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.