You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables illustrate the trading of Fairtrade's

coffee

and bananas in five European

countries

(

, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, Sweden) in 1999 and 2004, measured in millions of

euros

. In general, the

sales

coffee

experienced growth across all

countries

in both years, with the

showing the most notable increase.

In contrast

, the

banana

trade

saw mixed trends, with some

countries

experiencing a rise

while

others saw a decline. The

had the highest growth in

coffee

, rising dramatically from 1.5

million

euros

in 1999 to 20

million

euros

in 2004. Switzerland

also

saw a significant increase, with

sales

doubling to 6

million

euros

in 2004. Belgium's

coffee

sales

grew moderately from 1 to 1.7

million

euros

On the other hand

, there were minimal changes where Denmark's

trade

volume remained below 1

million

euros

and Sweden's increased by only 0.2

million

euros

. Switzerland led the

trade

of bananas in 1999 and 2004, with 15 and 47

million

euros

sales

respectively. Sweden and Denmark,

however

, saw declines in their

banana

sales

, with Sweden’s dropping to 0.8 and Denmark’s to 1.1 by 2004. Belgium showed the most notable increase, from 0.6

million

euros

in 1999 to 4

million

euros

in 2004, almost sevenfold growth. The

also

saw an impressive rise, with its

banana

trade

increasing by more than five times, from 1 to 5.5. In conclusion,

while

coffee

sales

increased across all

countries

banana

sales

varied, with some

countries

seeing a rise and others a decline. The

demonstrated the most significant changes in both

coffee

and

banana

sales

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