The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares data about how many cars went to the centre of the metropolis by inhabitants and travellers from 1996 to 2005.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of both of them reduced over the period of 9 years;
additionally
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, after a range of the limited the figure of citizens become less than the non-residents.
According to
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the diagram, in the beginning, the city's population, the most community who travelled to the city centre in 1996, hit just under 10,000;
then
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it dipped to just over 9000 in 1997;
thereafter
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, it rose to the same number at the start in 1998;
however
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, it declined overwhelmingly to 4500 in 2001;
nevertheless
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, it rose to 5000 in 2002;
then
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it fell to the minimum mark at 3500 in 2004;
finally
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, it reached 4000 in 2005. The graph demonstrates that people, who did not live in the town, were
in contrast
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to the residents' fashion between 1996 and 2002 owing to the fact that in 1966, they touched 5000a after that it leapt significantly to approximately 8000 in 1999 and their score almost stabilized until 2002;
although
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, they dropped sharply and reported the nadir at 3000 in 2003, yet they jumped moderately to nearly 5000 in 2005.
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