The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicted above gives information about foreigners who

traveled

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travelled

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into

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to

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the

UK

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for three main purposes over a thirty-

year

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period, spanning from 1989.

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, those who wanted to spend their holidays in the

UK

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have the most significant

number

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among

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visitors'

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visitors

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groups. Starting at over 6

million

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visitors

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in the first

year

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, it hit a maximum

at

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of

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9

million

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five years later. Following a sudden drop,

although

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it reached nearly the same

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of

visitors

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as the

firs

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first

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year

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in 2004, afterwards with a steady rise, again it touched 9

million

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in the

last

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year

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.

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, the

number

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of

business men

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businessmen

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traveling

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travelling

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to the

UK

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decreased from 5

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to 4

million

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in

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at

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the commencement of the period, but it went up gradually and surpassed the

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of tourists in the holiday group at under 7

million

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by the

year

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2004. Even though

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it kept its upward trend until the

last

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years and reached 8

million

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, it fell to 7

million

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in the

year

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2009. Now turning our attention

two

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to

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the group with fewer

visitors

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,

compare

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aforementioned

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travellers, those who intended to meet their families and friends had the lowest

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of visits over the period. Beginning at under 4

million

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, it experienced a stable upward trend to reach 7

million

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in the

year

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2008;

then

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it dropped to 6

million

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at

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in

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the

last

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year

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.

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, more people went to the

UK

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for spending

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to spend

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their

leisur

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leisure

times

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time

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.