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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about the number of items that
Indian's
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India's
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 domestic
producer
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producers
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 generate in 3
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various
 sections namely,
the
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apply
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agriculture, industry, and services between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, it was important that all trends other than
farming
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the farming
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 section increased over the period of 40 years.
According to
 the diagram, In the
begining
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beginning
, agriculture, the most important factor in 1960, hit roughly 63;
thereafter
, it reduced overwhelmingly to the lowest mark among other parts in 2000 at roughly 15. The graph demonstrates that
induatry
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industry
 and services were in
contrats
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contrast
 to the prior item owing to
teh
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the
 fact that, both of them in the start touched the same figure of 15 after that, services rose enormously to the
fisrt
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first
 level in 2000 and they reached the same score at Agriculture in 1960.
In addition
,
industry
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the industry
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 leapt somewhat to approximately 25 in 1980 and its number stabilized until 2000.
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