The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the ratios of numerous uses of water in
America
,Europe,Africa,and Asia
.
Overall
,it can be seen that even-though
Africa,Correct your spelling
even though
Asia
,and South America
mainly use aqua for farming purposes,both North America
and Europe manipulate that of
mainly for commercial uses.
Change preposition
apply
To begin
with,more than four-fifth
of H2O Fix the agreement mistake
four-fifths
use
for farming activities in Africa and Add a missing verb
is use
Asia
,while
Central Asia
experienced with
88% as the highest ratio among all the other areas.Change preposition
apply
However
,despite of
the business purposes in South East Change preposition
apply
Asia
, those territories use that of just below one-tenth for industrial and homing activities. In Correct your spelling
addition
addittion
South Add a comma
addittion,
America
also
manipulate 71% water
for farming.Change preposition
of water
Furthermore
,the figure for household affairs in both Central America
and South East Asia
is similar with 7%.
In contarst
,Europe has the highest percentage for Correct your spelling
contrast
commercial
field with 53%,and the figure for that of in North Correct article usage
the commercial
amarica
is 43%.Correct your spelling
America
On the other hand
,the latter hold
39% and 13% for agriculture and household respectively.In comparison,just below one-fifth of Change the verb form
holds
percentage
of aqua is used for household chores in South Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
America
as the highest among all the states.Submitted by ranpuluk on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratios" was used 2 times.
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