The line graph depicts the percentage of China's population distributed among 3 age groups.

The line graph depicts the percentage of China's population distributed among 3 age groups.
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The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of China's
population
distributed among three age groups—0-14, 15-64, and 65+—from 1960 to 2050, including future projections.
Overall
, the proportion of the working-age
group
(15-64) was the largest throughout the period,
while
the elderly
population
(65+) saw a gradual rise.
In contrast
, the
percentage
of young people (0-14) declined significantly. By 2050, the share of the 65+ age
group
is expected to surpass that of the 0-14 age
group
. In 1960, children aged 0-14 accounted for the highest
percentage
, at roughly 40%.
However
,
this
figure experienced a steady decline over the years, falling to around 25% by 2020 and is projected to drop
further
to approximately 15% by 2050.
Similarly
, the elderly
population
(65+) began at a low point of around 5% in 1960 but has shown consistent growth. By 2020, it reached 15% and is expected to rise significantly, surpassing 25% by 2050. The working-age
population
(15-64) showed an opposing trend. Starting at about 55% in 1960,
this
group
gradually increased to peak at over 70% around 2010.
However
,
after
this
peak, the
percentage
began to decline and is predicted to decrease
further
to just over 60% by 2050. Despite
this
decline,
this
group
will likely remain the largest segment of the
population
throughout the entire period.
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