The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the peercentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the peercentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates export incomes for five product groups during 2015 and 2016. The table
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shows information about changes in
percent
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for each category over a one-year period.
Overall
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, what stands out is that petroleum products were the most valuable source of export income.
On the contrary
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, textiles were the least exported
merchandises
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. Interestingly, textiles export had the most notable growth over the year.
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gems and jewellery experienced a considerable fall between 2015 and 2016. In detail, oil-related materials were sold for the most in these years by roughly over 60
billion
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$. Following them technological products had the second place on the list by just below 60
billion
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$ in 2015. Meanwhile, jewellery and food were bought by other countries by approximately 40 and 30
billion
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.
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, fabricated manufacturing was sent out of the country for the least by well over 20
billion
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in 2015. Regarding changes, all the products experienced a rise in sales except jewellery. The most dramatic change was seen in textiles by more than 15% and peaked at over 30
billion
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. Engineers’ work sales
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plunged by 8.5% and became the second considerable increase of the year.
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to others, jewellers' business dropped by more than 5% in the same year
however
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it stayed at over 40
billion
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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