The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. --DELETED LINK--
The chart provided above depicts five different statistics about
students
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University
in Use synonyms
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1937, 1967 and 2017.
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the years
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of enrollments saw a marked rise over the Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
While
a dramatic increase occurred in the proportion of Linking Words
oversea
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overseas
students
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at the end
, the percentage of those who attended the Linking Words
university
from nearby areas had significantly fallen since earlier Use synonyms
years
.
Regarding the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
, in 1937, the Use synonyms
university
had admitted a few Use synonyms
students
above 300, over the next 30 Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
this
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number
almost tripled. Use synonyms
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percentage
students
whose homes were as close as 40 miles to the Use synonyms
university
experienced a sharp decline Use synonyms
by
40% in the year 1967, it decreased drastically to Change preposition
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negligible
amount of 1-2 per cent later. For the first Add an article
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half century
, overseas pupils made up just over 5% of all Add a hyphen
half-century
students
, but both the Use synonyms
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of total new registrations and Use synonyms
portion
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a portion
the portion
foreigner
jumped almost six times and 5 times in 2017, to stand at 6254 and 32% respectively. It is worthwhile to mention, as time Fix the agreement mistake
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to
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university
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in
the commencement, it reached Change preposition
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to
102 by the end.
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gender based
data, Add a hyphen
gender-based
at
the beginning, 10% more men had studied Change the preposition
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in
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the
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university
than women, and Use synonyms
this
gap expanded steadily to Linking Words
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years
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