The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
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The illustration provides information on the percentage of households that owed appliances in a lustrum over the 90 decades in the United States.
According to
the data, the percentages of washing machines and computers increased following a similar trend. The
first,
increased by 10% in the first
year
,
then
stabilized for the subsequent
year
, and for the next three years continued to increase by another
ten
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10
percent. Computers, meanwhile, rose slightly from 40% to 58% in 3 years, and
then
increased significantly, reaching 70% in the
last
year
. In the case of DVD players, the percentage dropped from a quarter to 15%, reaching an all-time low in just 12 months.
However
, during the following years, a gradual increase continued until it was present in 40% of households.
Furthermore
, a glance at the information on the Internet clearly shows that
year
by
year
the trend changed but always grew, going from ten
percent
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per cent
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to exactly half.
Finally
, telephones have grown dramatically, from less than 20% to
three quarters
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three-quarters
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of households. In summary, general growth occurred in all of them, with the most notable trend being that of telephones.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adoption rates
  • technological proliferation
  • year-on-year growth
  • digital divide
  • saturation point
  • laggard technology
  • consumer electronics
  • technological obsolescence
  • internet penetration
  • market dynamics
  • socioeconomic factors
  • innovation trajectory
  • connectivity infrastructure
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