The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide key information about the film released ratios and the total
percentages
of Use synonyms
ticket
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sales
in a country in the time ranging from 1996 to 2006. The units are measured in Use synonyms
percentages
.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that drama films represent the highest propitiation in the film released graph. Linking Words
In addition
, comedy tickets were the most Linking Words
soled
in 2006. Correct your spelling
sold
Whereas
, romance Linking Words
ticket
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sales
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the
lowest rate Add a missing verb
had the
at
the same year.
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in
According to
the data shown, during 2006, the Linking Words
percentages
of Use synonyms
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the film
a film
film
released were at the highest level in the drama section, with a significant 35%, which means that it increased Fix the agreement mistake
films
about
10 Change preposition
by about
percent
in that century. Comedy films Change the spelling
per cent
also
increased from 20% in 1996 to 25% by 2006. Linking Words
While
fantasy and romance films approximately Linking Words
represent
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apply
an equivalent
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an equivalent percentage
equivalent percentages
percentages
throughout the century.
In terms of cinema Use synonyms
ticket
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sales
, we can clearly observe that comedy Use synonyms
was dominate
the graph with Change the verb form
dominated
a
20% in 1996 and almost 23% in 2006. Drama Correct article usage
apply
ticket
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sales
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also
had similar ratios in Linking Words
the
both mentioned years. Correct article usage
apply
While
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,
fantasy soared from less than 5% to about 8%. Romance tickets Remove the comma
apply
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on
the other hand, plunged from 5% to approximately 2%.Add the comma(s)
, on
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