The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide key information about the film released ratios and the total
percentages
of ticket
sales
in a country in the time ranging from 1996 to 2006. The units are measured in percentages
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that drama films represent the highest propitiation in the film released graph. In addition
, comedy tickets were the most soled
in 2006. Correct your spelling
sold
Whereas
, romance ticket
sales
the
lowest rate Add a missing verb
had the
at
the same year.
Change preposition
in
According to
the data shown, during 2006, the percentages
of Add an article
the film
a film
film
released were at the highest level in the drama section, with a significant 35%, which means that it increased Fix the agreement mistake
films
about
10 Change preposition
by about
percent
in that century. Comedy films Change the spelling
per cent
also
increased from 20% in 1996 to 25% by 2006. While
fantasy and romance films approximately represent
Verb problem
apply
an equivalent
Correct the article-noun agreement
an equivalent percentage
equivalent percentages
percentages
throughout the century.
In terms of cinema ticket
sales
, we can clearly observe that comedy was dominate
the graph with Change the verb form
dominated
a
20% in 1996 and almost 23% in 2006. Drama Correct article usage
apply
ticket
sales
also
had similar ratios in the
both mentioned years. Correct article usage
apply
While
,
fantasy soared from less than 5% to about 8%. Romance tickets Remove the comma
apply
on
the other hand, plunged from 5% to approximately 2%.Add the comma(s)
, on
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